it could be fun.. admitting that he was a 'tripod'. heh.. extremely minor quibble.. you wrote seventh year when you meant second.
it looks like Harry actually had his future plans laid out before he came to talk with the nice lady.. like he was coming in to recruit her..
I think you can come up with a few chapters that would be fun, some cool rituals to make changes in the magical world,
so, then, every death eater had to receive personal attention from Voldy to join..no wonder they wore masks...
TW
Author's response
No, I meant seventh, as it was Clarise that was speaking at that point.