Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-14

Wow thanks for updating so soon!!

aaaaaah i loved it!

congratulations on "the sex scene"! i'm glad they did, it wasn't too rushed. particularly as they are going to be separated for a while now.

i just think they are an adorable couple. i love how you write them

thanks very much and can't wait for the next update!

Author's response

Thanks so much, it's amazing how difficult it is to write a scene like that. It's like "whoops can't write that" and "mm need to find a different word for that" lol.

So pleased you liked the update and thank you for reviewing.