This was fucking hot!
I agree with moonpig, there is deffo lots of emotion between the two and I think its great they waited this long for when they were both ready.
You write everything so well and its so descriptive! Fab chapter, can't wait for more.
Although I'm sad for when Jill goes home, if she does
More soon plzzzzz
dondon xo.
Author's response
Yeah you thought it was hot. hurrah.
I'm so pleased you like Jill and Bob.
You know my English teacher once told me that i was rubbish at creative writing and description, so you made my day. THANK YOU.