I love your writing style, you give so much attention to detail and pacing. nothing about this (or any chapter for that matter) felt rushed.
IT FINALLY HAPPENED! so happy. it is about time.
It was also nice how you gave a whole chapter to just Jill and Bob, that they had some alone time with no one else around.
great job, and thanks for updating so soon!
Author's response
Thank you so much for such a lovely review. Bob and Jill definatley deserved their own chapter. I'm so happy everybody seems to think this was the right time for them. I wanted to sneak it in and let it be a surprise but i had to rate the chapter so that didn't work.
Thank You :)