Review for Escape From This AfterLife

Escape From This AfterLife

(#) lostmymindxx45 2008-10-15

Okay, So some Idead I have are-

1) Frank and Bob escape from the cave thing and come home, only to find Grace and Mikey making out. Bob tackles Mikey, who is in love with Grace. Grace gets confused and doesn't know who she really likes.

Bob and Mikey get in a fight and Ray rip them off eachother.

And Frank finds out Grace is really his sister. So he bites her because he doesn't want to lose her (as in his only family he can be with)

But also Frank is heartbroken Gee died. Because Gee and Frank had like a secret relationship. (Nothing big, but they sometimes kissed and other stuff)

And one day they meet a werewolf and he tells them a way to bring Gee back.

And at the same time, Mikey and Bob are getting into fights and Grace doesn't know what to do.

Ray has a crush on Bob. (IDK why..He just didn't have any part in this review. lol)

Okay, so those are my ideas...I kno they are weird..But I love drama!

xo
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Author's response

Umm yeah It was that chapter when Ray escapes and find Mikey and Grace getting it on! Haha lol.

It was also this chapter were Franklin thinks that Grace is his Half-Sister so I guess thats already happening. Is there is gonna be NO Ferard in this story!

Umm, do you like have like MSN or something so you can tell me?

Thanks xx

ML,Fin Ox.