Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) Moonshyne 2008-10-17

Hi there Neve,

That was so exciting and I loved all the little details, like the first elevator scene and after how they just held each other.

I loved the end how he picked her up and took her into the shower.

I loved the spontenaity (?)of the moment. I really love this pairing.

So looking forward to more.

Author's response

Thank you so much Moonshyne. It really means alot when you leave a review. I just hope you like the next update :)