Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) Moonshyne 2008-10-19

Hi there Neve,

This was so sad at first when they both misunderstood each other's intentions.

But it ended exciting with Bob going after Jill.

And always that element of comedy with Ray and Frank trying to stop Worm from getting Bob.

Great update as usual.

Author's response

I kind of think Jill and Bob are so similar in ways. Neither just shouting out loud and asking what's up with the other.

I'm so pleased you liked the Frank/Ray/Worm bit. Lol