Hi Neve,
If you have three reviews from me it's because ficwad is messing up.
But here it goes yet again.
I loved it and felt so sad when Bob and Jill had the misunderstanding. I can see how Bob could be so hurt whne he felt she wasn't even going to say goodbye to him.
I also felt Jills pain when he was cold and unfeeling, but she did seem to recognize that he looked hurt so hopefully that will bode well for him.
I loved how in the end he was going after her and let her know how he really felt.
What can I say about the end, it had me in stitches just imagining Ray and Frank trying to stop Worm for going after Bob.
Brilliant as usual.
Author's response
Ficwad does my head in too sometimes, the amount of times i've lost something when i respond to reviews. Thanks for bearing with it and posting a review.