Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-20

brilliant update!

so sad when bob blanked her! silly boy! but that's real life isn't it, people fuck it up all the time!

so glad he is going after her!!

loved the little extras you got in there also. Framk is just so adorable!

the description of a sleepy Gerard is too sweet! and his comment about Jill wearing Bob out! God I could feel her embarrassment!

Frank tackling Worm is just so funny!

can't wait to read more. Thanks very much!

Author's response

Thank you so much for reviewing and for making me laugh. I'm so pleased you liked it :)

Gerard is bad - he mortified poor Jill. lol

I'm so glad you liked the Frank and Worm bit. I was writing the Bob and Ray bit and i suddenly thought about how Bob would be able to get away without Worm going nuts. I then remembered the "I'm Not Okay" video and how Frank practically broke Brian's neck when he tackled him. So it all just came together and it worked - hurrah.

I have to admit Frank's my fav so it's impossible not to write about the talented Mr Iero.