Hey Neve, I love the description you use when you write, I feel like I’m right there with them.
I loved Jill watching him sleep but I wish they had just spoken to each other – so frustrating but just brilliant in terms of the story.
I agree with everyone Frank is just too cute in this story. I loved how he just invited himself into Jill’s room lol. I did like the angry Frank. I love the extra bits you add in like Frank kicking Gerard out of his room to say goodbye and Gerard automatically holding Frank back and trying to calm him down. I had to laugh when Gerard got fed up with the shouting and just went back to his room.
I love Ray, he keeps them all on the right path and he managed to get Bob to see he was fucking everything up. Lastly (cause I’ve got to stop before I write a novel) I loved the Worm bit – so friggin funny. Gerard saying "This band is going to shit” ha ha.
Thank you – I loved this so much.
Author's response
wow, thank you for the lovely review. I'm glad there were so many bits that you enjoyed. I've just posted a new update which i hope you enjoy too.
I really like the relationship between Gerard and Frank, so damn cute but i can imagine when they fall out it's mental.