Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) moviemaniac888 2008-10-27

I laughed SO hard when Ray had to explain to Brian about why Bob was not with them.

I almost lost it when Ray found out the only reason he got the call was because the other guys had their phones on silent.

Hilarious chapter! amazing writing, as always.

Bob and Jill, cute as ever.

Update soon, pretty please.

Author's response

I know, i was a bit cruel to Ray though but i'm glad you liked it. You can just imagine Ray being the responsible one - gotta love the man with the fro.

thanks for reviewing :)