Hi there neve,
I loved this chapter from beginning to end. From Justin and Ruth checking in on the two of them to Bob promising not to go anywhere.
And our little genius Ray was outsmarted by everyone else. Poor Ray having to explain to Brian what happened to Bob. I can picture Worm chuckling in the background thinking you screwed me now your turn.
LOL!!!
I loved Gwen too, especially when she said that wasn't something they expected from Bob but it was for Gerard. LOLO!!
The whole chapter was great. I'm so looking forward to more. I just love this story and your writing.
Author's response
Thank you so much, i really did think this update was a bit of a stinker. I can't help but make Bob a honey, i think i might be making them too cute. oh well.
You called Ray a little genius - that was just too cute. I loved that. They've outsmarted him this time but i'm sure he'll get his revenge - ha ha. I totally missed the Worm angle - bummer. lol.
I'm glad you liked Gwen, i don't know how much she will be in it at this point but i kinda like her character. She puts Gerard right in his place.
My next update is almost ready - ahh the pressure.