hey i loved this chapter too! so funny!
i loved Ruth and Justin at the beginning! when Ruth thought about taking a photo, that was so great!
and Ray answering the phone and all the others' phones were on silent! pure genius!
and Gerard being a grumpy whinger and Frank being very Frank like!
and of course Bob and Jill cuteness!
brilliant!
can't wait for more!
Author's response
Thank you and i'm so pleased i made you laugh. i love when people say i've caught a bit of the character in the way i've written them - so cool.
I know i make Gerard a whinger, i feel kind of bad about that. I really appreciate the review.