Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) moonpig 2008-10-28

Lol, this was so funny Neve.

I so agree with all the previous comments. Poor Ray and i could just picture the look on Gerard's face when Gwen said she would expect it from him - ha ha.

I really liked the wee snippet of Jill waking up with Bob - so cute.

Author's response

You can just imagine the look on Gerard's face - hehe.

Next update is mainly Bob and Jill which i hope you like.

thanks for reviewing :)