You have a great way of conveying emotion. Makes you really feel it. It's a very interesting start to the story ... and that Frank is the central character that's depressed and turning to alcohol/drugs/etc.
Keep going, I can't wait to see where you take this one =D
Author's response
Wow, thank you. I'm so pleased you read my story and left a review. It really means alot.
I always write Frank as being a bit of a joker but i just had this idea. It's hard to write because i really have to be in a certain mood to write it. I will try to update soon.
Thank you