Hello Huntress, What a wonderful story you have crafted here. I found it when I was brousing the pages and was immediately intrigued. The new view of Voldemort certainly is interesting and Dumbledores reversal from light to dark intriguing. The way you have of writing in the present tense is also unique as not many authors use it. As a retired English Teacher I find it most fascinating to read as my mind wants to keep slipping into the past tense. Keep up the good work and I hope that the Doctors can heal your Mother's cancer as they did for my Mother. She survived two episodes of cancer and lived to a ripe old age before she died of natural causes.
Author's response
Thank You for your wonderful review... my mom was hopitalized in March diagnosed and died 9 days later there are so many form of cancer and this was a fast spreading quick growing variety. I hope to start the story back up here in the near future now that the trauma of family holidays is past. Again thank you for your wishes and a wonderful review.