OH MY GOD! That was so exciting, it gave me goosebumps. I hope to god that Madison lives, Bob'll be shattered otherwise. And poor Ali, I loved seeing that side to her, and her taking the bullet for Bob was so good and well written. And it wasn't cliche at all. I've warmed to Jim and Ali, even though they're both dead now. Pleeeeease make madison live???????? Great chapter, update soon. Alice.
Author's response
Hi Alice,
Thank you so much I really appreciate it. You'll have to find out.
Yes in the end she wasn't so bad and again thank you.
I've always wanted to make Jim definitely more likable and sympathetic to Bob.
We'll see.
Thanks again for your review!!!