Review for Brought Together, Torn Apart

Brought Together, Torn Apart

(#) Moonshyne 2008-11-05

Hi there,

First of all the Frank situation, Am I the only one that sees it this way? Frank walked out on his girlfriend when she needed him the most, because she didn't want to do what he wanted her to do. He shrugged his responsibility. If it was any one except Frank he would be an ass. If he really wanted to in American courts he could get visitation and would have to support the child. I feel bad for her because now that she has her life straightened out he wants back in. Again if he really wanted to he could get visitation, there is no way the courst would allow him not to be a part of his son's life unless he was found to be abusive. I know he regrets what he did and I do feel bad that they can't work it out amicably.

The rest of the chapter was just adorable. Especially Charli's makeover I couldn't stop laughing!!
That is so typical of two year olds getting into everything.

I'm glad Harper and Gee are getting along so wonderfully!!

Great update and looking forward to more!!

Author's response

Hey,

I think you are the only one. And Im glad at least one person noticed lol. The only reason it is written like that is because Gerard is saying it, and like a shallow minded man he is taking Frank's side without even considering Alex's feelings.

I agree, he should of stayed with her and took care of his responsibilites.

TBH I just threw the whole Frank thing in there last night, but it may come up later on in the story.

Haha, Charli is a monster bless her lol, terrible two's as they say.

Gerard and Harper are getting on great, hopefully it stays that way.

Thanks for the review :)

dondon xo.