Review for Brought Together, Torn Apart

Brought Together, Torn Apart

(#) Moonshyne 2008-11-08

Hi there dondon,

That was a great chapter!! Poor Harper getting the brunt of his anger and now having all this self doubt,

Poor Mikey caoght in the middle of it all. But it needed to come out.

I can't wait to see the fall out becuase of this.

Great job!!

Looking forward to more!!