I already told you how much I liked the first chapter to your story, and merci por le... I dunno french, so fuck that, thank you for the creds.
Just one thing - put a line break between your paragraphs. You don't have to do that in "real" life because of indents, but since ficwad doesn't allow you to indent, you just put in line breaks between every new paragraph or piece of dialogue. It makes it much easier to read and you might even get more readers, cause it doesn't like a huge one paragraphed story.
Anyway, can't wait til I get the new chapter. Good job.