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Big Bad Hinata and some more weird suff
Big Bad Hinata and some more weird suff
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Mairead
2008-11-10
You might want to think about capitalizing your I's, and learning more about how to use commas. It'll make you a better writer.
It seems like you're having fun writing this-- go you.