That was a really good start. It's certainly got me wanting more.
I like it....it's exactly how I could imagine Bert to have been like as a teen. Carefree and rebelling. As i said, I do really like it.
I hope you continue.
-Emily xo.
Author's response
thank you very much(:
yeah, thats exactly how Bert seems to be, its what I love most about him, hahah.
i'm working on my next chapter now.
(: