well i just started reading this story and i really love the plot...My fave line was the same as shysmile's, "maybe, bite it off. Or pull it off." lol. I like how even tho gee and egan r togeather, theres still drama in the story...I have one suggestion tho...Maybe if you can, put a flashback in so that the "Something she said she’d never do again." line would make more sence? I think it would work well. But besides that i really love ths story, and i love the fact that its in 3rd person, rather than in gee or egans pov and how the narrator makes some comments here or there...it's a really cool story.
Please update soon!
Isabella
Author's response
There won't be a flashback, per se, but it will make sense in time. I've got a plan ;] Kinda like God or something, huh?
I like that line myself. Thank you for the sweet review!