Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) easykeys 2008-11-23

*sniffs*

That was so sad, in a good way if you get me.

I dunno why but I wanted her to cry in front of him lol, I'm pleased they are going to see eachother soon though, hopefully.

Love this so much and I felt so bad for them both. Although I could imagine Frank being sent over to sort that girl out, who by the way, sounds like a right evil bitch!

Cant wait for more :)

dondon xo.

Author's response

Thank you Dondon, i can't believe you reviewed so fast. It was ace. I was really debating whether she would cry or not. I wanted to make her strong and she would want to protect him for feeling bad.

The evil bitch returns,

so pleased you liked it