I love Mikey's character, that's exactly how I always think of him - always worrying about his big brother, and not wanting him to get hurt, or to hurt someone else. And Gerard's cluelessness is absolutely adorable!
However, I do think you should proofread before you post. I can spot a few minor spelling mistakes, and there are a lot of places that should have commas, but don't. The storyline is also a tad clichéd - but then, we all like a good old boy-meets-boy scenario!
I love the line, The week had gone by in a blur of golden eyes and a certain person that smelled off faint coffee and sugar. It paints a great picture of Frank - and of course, we all know that Gerard would be especially attracted to someone who smells of coffee! ;)
I loved this last chapter, too - very hot, the perfect mix of romance and sex.
I can't wait to read more :D