I don't always leave a review when I read something, but just know I'm following along here. You're doing a good job with the "build up". And I'm sure, Gerard's not dumb - he knows something's up with her - in addition, he's probably wrestling with his own feelings. I like that you had him actually say, "step father" - like he's just trying to reinforce it for himself as well as her. I could only imagine what a fucked up situation this would be in real life.
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