That was fun. I like where you ended it – right at the peak of the “twist.”
Also, BenRG's comment has given me an idea... the complications of Polyjuice and metamorphomas... Oh the possibilities...
Shawn (a.k.a. cloneserpents)
Author's response
Heya Clone! Thank yeew! The master of the guillotine ending. That's me.
Complications. Sigh You guys are gonna make me write a new story aren't you.
Alorkin