You know what I like best about this story? The way you write everyone emotionally ... I mean, Cami's really young - like way younger than Gerard and that's a major factor in the way they both have acted throughout this whole story (and the previous one even). When you're that young, you just feel like you can't possibly have found your "soul mate" - that it just can't be right. So I think your characterization is awesome. And then just in general, they've had so much drama in the relationship - and with her running off and having his kid? I say it's like a soap opera, but it's really realistic too. Great job on this one xD