Review for Breaking free (yeah i know its unoriginal! But give it a chance!)

Breaking free (yeah i know its unoriginal! But give it a chance!)

(#) mememe 2006-08-20

hi im ali, im a friend of the writer of this story and she asked me to write the next bit. This is it. Oh and by the way feel free to write a chapter of this story at any time.
In the gym after basketball practise Sharpay is waiting for Troy. He is putting away the basketballs. Sharpay comes up to Troy and slaps him on the ass.
"Hey sexy" she says. Troy spins around and says
"Sharpay how could you tell anyone?" Sharpay says
"Im sorry baby but i couldnt not tell after all your the hottest guy in this dump." with these last words she charms Troy, he smiles. Sharpay brings her lips up to his. Their kiss is warm and passionate. While they kiss Sharpay lays on the gym mats in the corner of the room. Troy gets on top of her.
"Oh Troy, make love to me." says Sharpay.
"It would be my pleasure sexy." says troy.