Well, you've killed off Gerard ... how much worse can it get? LMAO ... I'm just kidding you know, right?
I think it's great that you've had the guys kidnap her. But ... how are they going to get away with it is the real question. I know you said you're writing it as you go along, and sometimes that works out, but I usually try to think of a few different scenarios for a story and then start typing and see if I'm "feelin'" a particular one. Not sure if that makes sense.
I liked that the lady thought Mikey and Bob were a gay couple! rotfl
=D
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Lol, I know it is just getting worse and worse.
I totally get what you mean about "feelin" it, I do that a lot.
Haha the gay part XD
Well tbh I see the word discontinued coming up.
dondon xo.