Hmm...I don't know, it does sound kin of familiar. I guess it might be a song. I'm going to have to agree with Del Rion. It would be better if you used "Inspired by" as a note to your story. Although I do think that Ithilwen was being a little harsh in the way she put it and it was totally uncalled for, she is right. I just looked up the song, and it does resemble the king missle song a lot. But I liked the twist you put on it, with the girl having a detatchable penis. Lol.
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