haha you know what I loved? "MY ASS WOULD BE GRASS"
I have never heard that before. it's hilarious.
so anyway, your writing reminds me a lot of canustakemyheart, in a good way because he is effing epic.
I really like this story so far, hoping you update again soon... :)
Author's response
aww thanks i think hes fucking epic too =]
hehe yeah i always get weird sayings like that stuck in my head with luck ill have more through out this whole series thingo :-)