Wow, Amanda's brother is a comlete dickhad! Although, i thought he was cool before.. Maybe the real Amanda was just always a real pain/spoilt princess/pissy bitch to him, so that sort of dignifies it. Buit still - that was pretty harsh.
So, if this girl is in Amanda's body, i wonder what Amanda is doing in Casey's body 'back in the future'. Probably looking like a whole lotta' crazy.
I liked how you wrote about how Casey misses home, and you didn't make Gerard COMPLETELY needy..although the chapter did kinda end abruptly.
More soon :)
Author's response
haha, youve given me some ideas i didnt have before!
thanks for the thoughtful review. i love when readers point out what they like and shit. :)