I like the fact that your fleshing out the minor characters as JKR didn't. Though not like a Teen novel As they are you deal with more adult issues and unfortunately these characters have to be adults for either side here.
I also like the fact that you have used Harry & Hermione to be a sort of catalyst here. I'd like to see more as you drive through all of the other characters. BTW will you keep to the girls here in this series? Adn will they be just the students, or will we see a snippet of Sinestra, Madam Bones or even Bella!
dennisud