Review for Brendon urie a unexpected love/info/part 1

Brendon urie a unexpected love/info/part 1

(#) Akanah 2009-01-18

Why are you posting this under the category FAKE? FAKE is a manga, not
a category for fake stories.

Besides putting the story in the wrong category:
Please use paragraphs, linebreaks are your friend.
Use a spellchecker and use punctuation. Your text is unreadable. But maybe this is intended?