Review for BBQ
Just as always like I expected this was really well done. You have got a really good knack at doing conversations they are just really realistic and natural. It was really exciting to read and i don't think you made any grammatical error.
YAY :) I want more pleeeaaaase!!!!
p.s This has inspired me to write something. Not tonite tho I've got exams all next week so i dunno 8(
Thanks =) I didn't feel it was my best thing, but it was just something that I had to type out. I'm glad it inspired you though! xD