HIYA SIS! Yes I did actually read your story. As much as I really don't care for your beloved MCR, I enjoyed it. My only real "beefs" with it (though ridiculously minor) are the few spelling errors and your total disrespect for capital letters. What have propper nouns and first words of sentences ever done to you huh? Anyway since your finished with this fic, it's not much use bringing it up now, just my criticism! Toodles for now!!
Author's response
i hate you stupid!! how did i now know you were reading this and i was just in the next room!
ughhhh i dont like when you read my crap cuz you make me feel stupid. but thats okay my people like it and they actually know who MCR is GAY!
(this is my sis comment so i can be mean)
i love my REAL fans.......IdIoT!