(#) DJ32 2009-02-03
Great work with this you are writting a very fun story. I aways look forard to updates and you love keeping me on the edge with this R/Hr thing your doing R is whiped when with Hr but goes all tough guy when he is alone all this half baked plot of his to get H beat up and not get in trouble. Ido not know if I hate him for being a pr*ck or feald bad for him for being whipped. I am quoting you now " Honestly at this point they probably should not be together" If you feal put him out of his pain and let H/Hr get to some gult free fun. That is just my two cents its your fic and I will keep having fun reading it so thanks.
PS One request Ron does Not get Hermione's Cherry. It does not have to go to Harry but it might be nice.
Author's response
My Ron is very dynamic. I have known pricks exactly like him who could really care less as long as they are getting some. As for your other point.
No comment.