I agree with DJ32. Also remember that FF.net doesn't allow for NC-17 stories, there was one story that had to be taken down because it was deemed too explicit by the administrators. It was moved to this site.
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I knew there was a reason for posting here first. I never read anything this good over there.
Not that FF net isnt great! Just not this hot.
Not to toot my own horn, though I sometimes have to after writing a section...
TMI?