Great story. I like the Omake at the end and think that alternate endings are great.
I look forward to reading more of your work and hope to get to see a Sequel from Seel'vor.
Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, I had fun writing it and that's always a good sign.
Drop Seel'vor a line and encourage him to pick up the thread he started with his fine omake.
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