Review for Breath

Breath

(#) Songbird21 2005-11-29

Sad. Way short though. You really should write more. Even just 1000 words would've been enough to turn this into something great. I mean, I didn't even get to read Sasuke's reaction to her death. Death in a fic of a main character is pointless unless you get to read the aftermath of pain and emotion that goes with it.