Review for Here Comes Trouble AKA: The Internet

Here Comes Trouble AKA: The Internet

(#) saugart 2006-08-25

You write: "Hr/D Hermione changes over the summer do to her abusive father, little does she know she isn't the only one with scars. Will a certain Slytherin be able to save her?"

You want "...due to...." instead.