Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) Moonshyne 2009-02-24

Hi there Neve,

Sorry I hadn't reviewed earlier.

This chapter was just so sad. I could really feel her anxiety and not just with her father's death but how her aunt made her feel about it all.

I loved how her cousin stuck up for her.

I'm glad Bob was there for her and followed her lead in consoling her.

It was really well written and I'll be sorry when this story is over.

Author's response

Thanks for the huge compliment, it's been ages since i last updated so it was lovely to find all your reviews. My final update is almost ready.