Good story, I really enjoyed it. It does give us several things to think about, and was brought to a good conclusion. And I did enjoy the omake as well, the second being better than the first imho.
Anyway, keep writing, I like your style.
Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, and thank you for your encouraging words - I'm currently working on a re-write of Battered Hearts, also on this site.
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