This was a bit hard to rate. I wasn't exactly drawn into the story. I guess I didn't feel the tension enough, which is what I think you ought to be aiming for in this story. The hook is that there's a mystery man stalking the narrator, but I didn't feel the narrator's worry or paranoia or something. She just seemed rambling or the narration made her attention seem flighty.
Still, you could probably work on this more. Add a bit more mood and details.
A few grammar things I noticed off bat, but you're at least more coherent than some of the other works over here. :)
Author's response
Thanks for the comment and suggestions!