Aww!
That last line made my face just light up, because it was so cute =]
Can I make a suggestion, though? In the summary you should capatalize Frank and Gerard, beause people usually don't read illiterate stories and if their names aren't capatalize that usually screams "illiterate". However, if they were capatalized, people would probably not judge it, give it a chance, and love it. Because it was great. =]
-Albi
Author's response
Thanks for the tip, I have changed it now. Thanks for reading it , I'm glad you liked it :)