Review for BBQ
...Wow. Okay. While I totally agree with the father wanting to protect his daughter [take it from somebody whose past proves that girls NEED TO BE PROTECTED], beating the crap out of somebody who did nothing to him is always, always wrong, no matter how you defend it.
And I thought the writing was excellent. [And I swear I'm not just saying that.] It had this almost...poetic, for lack of a more descriptive term, aspect to it. And kudos to you for posting something so personal- I wouldn't be able to make fanfiction out of the stuff that happened to me. You're strong.
That was really good. =]
-Albi
Author's response
Thanks for this review. And I agree with you cause even I can see his point of view that he'd only want the "best" for his daughter - but he was totally blind to anything else. I married his daughter btw and it's like 6 years later (I've been totally sober for 5 of those) and he still occasionally finds a way to verbally abuse me.
Anyway, thanks again and if you read more of my stuff, I'd love to hear what you think.
xD