Aaaw, you havent had any reveiws? Thats crappy O.o I just read the whole story up to here, its the first Death Note fanfic I've read and I love it ^_^ Now I'm glad I took a peek at some fanfics other than band ones :P
I cant wait to see what happens next - L is just so damn adorable!squeals
I'll be waiting for the next update :]
Rayray xox
P.s - I didnt see any grammer mistakes, but that might be because I was so caught up in the story, and dont worry - the POV changes arent confusing :]