Okay, this might be a little out of order, just a warning.
Haha, Ray and Bob were betting again lol.
/”Nicole drops her hand from his face, complete love in her eyes. Gerard stares back, then lifts his bloody hand from his side and putting it in her hair. He clutches her to him, and kisses her./”
So, I’m guessing that they’re an item now? Aww…It’s so sweet that Gerard stood up for her when Kevin was talking about Nicole…They are so in love! It’s really sweet. But, okay I have to ask this, and don’t hate me for this please :) When he put his bloody hand in her hair, does she have bloody hair now? I’m sorry I just had to ask, I couldn’t help my self :)
”And Frankie. Wonderful, amazing Frankie.”
It’s pretty obvious that Evangeline has a crush on Frankie! But does he feel the same way about her? He better…They would make the greatest couple ever.
I think it’s great that she’s finally has some people that care for her. I really hope that they’ll help her out with what she’s going through, because that’s pretty tough. I’m looking forward to reading about that conversation. ..
You did an amazing job describing all of the characters personalities and hinting that there might be something going on with Gerard that’s making him so withdrawn and reserved. That’s really interesting actually…I’m thinking that maybe him and Evangeline have more in common than they think…Maybe they’re going to help each other out?
I have to say that one of my favorite parts was when Mikey had an asthma attack and she had to get his inhaler for him… and then help him out and help him get up. Wow, I really don’t think that I could have done that, I prolly would have had a panic attack or something like that, and then you would see two people not being able to breathe in the hallway lol...so anyways...You wrote that out very well, you’re really good at writing really good imagery.
I rated your story too by the way :)
I can’t wait for the next update!
Xo-Izzzibee