I am glad to hear about your daughter. Now onto the review.
I have to say that whole scene with Hermione's mother caught me off guard (something that doesn't happen often, believe me) so good job there, and you had Harry in character as well, so good job there too. It's becoming very obvious where Hermione gets her kinky side the more we see of her mother.
I like how you developed Dan, from the murderous father who is a member of the Spanish Inquisition (they didn't go away, they became dentists. I loved that line) and gets a very good opinion of Harry when it came to food.
Looking forward to the political Harry in the upcoming chapters. Keep up the good work.
Author's response
I'm glad I was able to surprise the readers, makes me realize my story is not completely predictable.
I am a father myself, and even being so sexually free myself, I will still have the urge to kill any boys that come near my daughters in 10 years or so. But I am also reasonable and if the boy is good for her I know I will come around eventually.
Especially if he can cook the steak I described...I hope you were all drooling right along with Dan like I was.
My Political Harry is subtle, I am not the best at writing that sort of character..yet. He will probably grow into the role just like everythign else rather than all of a sudden becoming the perfect politcal machine.
Many things just seem to drop into his lap. But I guess that comes with the silver spoon.